مراجعة الصف الاول الثانوى ( Paragraph Or Letter Or E-mail)

Ninth: the Paragraph:

إترك مسافة تعادل 5 حروف فى السطر الأول فقط من الموضوع.

 إ بدأ كل جملة بحرف Capital  كبير وواضح.

ضع (.) واضحة فى نهاية كل جملة.

ابدأ الموضوع بجملة رئيسية تحتوى فى مجملها على فكرة الموضوع.

 إستخدم الزمن الصحيح والمناسب لنوعية الموضوع الذى نكتبه.

تجنب استخدام الجمل المعقدة وعليك استخدام الجمل البسيطة والسهلة فى المعنى.

خصص صفحة كاملة للموضوع فى ورقة الامتحان ويجب أن تترك سطر عند كتابة الموضوع.

يجب ترك مسافة بين كل كلمة وأخرى.

  الموضوعWriting paragraph كتابة  

أنواع المواضيع:

1- موضوع عام هداف                            2-موضوع عام هدام   

3-قصة                                                            4-شخصـي                    

- يمكن أن نكتب مقدمات و خواتيم المواضيع العامة الإيجابية و السلبية فقط (ولا تصلح لكل الموضوعات)

أولا الإيجابية:

         No one can denyينكر that…….(اسم الموضوع) plays an important roleدورا  in our life and societyالمجتمع. (( أو اسم المكان المتأثر -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Therefore we must take care of … اسم الموضوع ……..  . It can make our country more comfortable اكثر راحة, happier and advanced.متقدم.

ثانيا السلبية:

يمكن استخدام نفس المقدمة للموضوع الأول مع بعض التغيرات :

فنكتب   a bad                                  بدلا من  an important

و كتابة الجمل الختامية مع حذف:

 (more comfortable, happier and advanced)

و نكتب بدلا منها  (متخلفةless comfortable ,sadder and backward)

أمثلة لمواضيع إيجابية: Tourism  السياحة                  Discipline                    النظام Education                    التعليـم Peace السلام

أمثلة لمواضيع سلبية: Terrorism                 الإرهاب Drugs                     المخدرات Illiteracy                    الأميـة   Wars الحروب

                                                                                                                 

* عند كتابة الخطاب لا بد من ملاحظة ما يلي:

- لابد من كتابة بيانات الخطاب كاملة ( العنوان مجزء واسفله التاريخ أعلي اليمين ).

- نبدأ الخطاب بكلمة Dear ……..  ناحية اليسار.

- ترك مسافة بادئة في أول الموضوع.

- نبدأ الخطاب بـ - Hello, how are you? I'm pleased to write to you.                    - ملاحظة زمن الجمل.

- كتابة جمل كاملة.         - في نهاية الخطاب نكتب see you soon .

- نختم الخطاب بـ - Yours / With my best wishes  وأسفلها اسم المرسل.

* عند كتابة الإيميل لا بد من ملاحظة ما يلي:

- لابد من كتابة بيانات الإيميل كاملة من خلال المعطيات

- From : your e-mail

- To : your friend's e-mail

- Subject : The subject of the message

- لاحظ أن بداية الإيميل وموضوعه ونهايته مثل الخطاب.

Ex:  Write a letter to your cousin:

E-mailالإيميل

تكتب إيميل المرسل له	To
تكب إيميل الراسل	From
موضوع الرسالة	Subject
	Date
Dear……المرسل له……, ……………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………..                                                     اسم الراسل	Message

The person I admire most

      The person I admire most is my father. He is a successful doctor. He treats his patients kindly. He is serious and sincere at work. He is a friendly character who spares no effort to help those who need him and holds back nothing in due. He is loved by all people around him. I am greatly affected by him so I wish very much to follow in his footsteps. That's why I consider him the most important person in my life.

The computerالحاسب الألي

No one can deny that the computer is one of the modern wonders of the world. It plays an important part in technology because it is more accurateكفء  and faster than human beings. It is used in many fields. It can be used in banks to control cashing and bank accounts. In addition, in hospitals, it can be used to check our health. Also, The computer is ideal for doing our everyday needs: it can be used to reserve plane tickets, in shopping, communicate with relatives and colleaguesزملاء . In the end, we can't do without the computer.

Pollutionالتلوث

Pollution is one of the worst problem in the world. Nothing is ugly than seeing much rubbish and exhaust fumes polluting the atmosphere. Pollution is an environmental problem which comes from man's bad use of his natural surroundings and resources such as air and water. It's a big problem that needs all efforts to put an end to. On one hand, man has foolishly damaged his environment when poisoned , the atmosphere and polluted the earth and water. Polluted air may damage man's lungs and cause death. Also, Adding poisonous gases such as Carbon dioxide to the atmosphere may cause increased temperatures consequently the ice at the Arctic and Antarctic is melted. So, environmental conferences are yearly held all over the world to discuss pollution problems, show its dangers and offer solutions.

Mobile phones

Mobile phones are one of the recent means of communications . They are of great importance to many people in society from a businessman to an ordinary man. In time of emergencyالطوارئ  people need to make a phone call asking for the ambulance help. In travel, mobiles are necessary to tell other people how you are doing. But some people have bad habits when using mobiles. They sometimes disturb people indoors unnecessarily at midnight. While driving, they may cause death, so the government should pass strict laws against using them while driving. However, doctors warn people of its disadvantages of exposingتعريض themselves to the side effects of electromagneticالمغناطسيسة الكهربية  waves causing cancer. So people should use mobile phones more wisely and quietly.

Health

     Health is a priceless treasure that completes our happiness and a gift of Allah. We cannot really enjoy our life if we are unhealthy. For an unhealthy person, life is no more than pain and suffering. He is a helpless member who cannot take part in the process of development. However, healthy people are always good members in their societies and help to achieve its welfare and progress.

So, people should take care of their personal cleanliness as it is tremendously important in the prevention of many kinds of infections. In order to be healthy, we must be clean. We must never eat food that smells bad or swollen canned food. We should always wash hands before and after a meal. We must either boil tap water or cool it before we drink. In the end, as it has been said that "prevention is better than cure" so everybody should pay attention to his health.

The problem of over - population

     It has become clear that over population in Egypt is a serious problem. It results in تؤدى إلى other more serious problems. Our youth can't find a flat to marry in or a suitable job to start their life. There is also a possible shortage نقصof food. Our cities became very crowded, they lack the needed infrastructureالبنية التحتية  for living.

So it has become a must that we should invade the desert نغزو   . The government does its best to encourage people to have small families through public awareness programmes برامج التوعية العامة on t.v. and papers. It send campaigns حملات  to remote and small villages to offer people information about birth controlتحديد النسل

Charity Societies

       Charity Societies الجمعيات الخيرية are organizations for helping the poor everywhere. Rich people establish them. They do their best to يبذل قصارى جهده make homeless and poor children live in a reasonable standardمستوى معقول  .They offer them care in different aspectsمناحي – مجالات . They offer the poor medical care free of change  مجاناً. If they are homeless مشرد , they offer them houses and food.

what people can do in your town to help the environment

people in my town can easily keep the environment clean, they must be very careful about public cleanliness , they can stop throwing rubbish in streets, they can put litter bins in front of their houses . they can look after  trees and plants  in streets , they can reduce using their own cars and use public vehicles, they must teach children the rules of public cleanliness.

What people should do to prevent illness

      To prevent illness ,people should always wash their  hands before a meal. They should bathe more often in hot weather , They should also be very careful about the food  and water they have They mustn't allow  flies to  land on their food. They should always boil tap water before drinking  it.   They  must never eat food that smells bad because it may be poisonous. They must not eat food from a tin if the tin is damaged

 Write a letter to your cousin:

Your cousin Wessam has asked you for advice on how to study English vocabulary. Write your reply to your cousin. Your name is Reda and you live at 111 Hussein Wassef Street, Dokki, Giza.